My Awesome story web (that i didn't finish)

During reading we read a story called take me to your leader. The story was about this purple alien named Gweep who was hiding in Tim closet and  who is talking to this boy named Tim he Gweep saying take me to your weader Tim did not know what he was talking about. We had to write out the the setting,solution,problem,actions and outcome.

I found the activity very hard.

What would you do if a alien went in your closet?

At Westburn Park

This week Miss Lee asked us to write a fabulous recount about our weekend. We had to add all the descriptive  tools  we have learnt.(but i did one)for example verbs metaphors nouns and Allitiratian nouns are naming words. Allitiration is at least 3 words with the same letter sound at the front.

I  chose to  write about my weekend at Westburn Park.

Can you spot the allitiration I wrote?

discriptive writing

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