Monday, May 6, 2019
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Hi Grant,
ReplyDeleteI like that you put in the characters in your story.
I enjoyed your story because you put in what parts you liked from the movie.
How about using the speaker tools or dictionary to help with your spelling.
Keep going!
From Room 3
Hi grant.
ReplyDeleteI like that you added detail about when the movie was so long.
I enjoyed your story because you wrote a lot then then the other time!.
Plese fixs your spelling you can use the words around the room and the sperker voice.
Keep going :3
hello Grant
ReplyDeleteI like how said that you went to church with your parents also I like how you put the characters in your story nice work.
I enjoyed when you said that it was sooo long that it almost made you sleep.I also enjoyed when you liked the fighting part of the movie.
how about using the tool button to help you with your spelling and like miss Lee said also you can use the speaker and the dictionary to for your spelling.
nice work keep on going.
from Izza