I am a student at St Bernadette’s School.. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Tuesday, July 23, 2019
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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Hi Grant
ReplyDeleteI like how you added lots of detail about your holiday.
Making paper planes sounds fun!
Who won the paper plane competition?
Can you make the writing bigger as it was hard to read.
hi Cameron! its Grant
Delete1.i know i added detail thats why i focused also thats how you finish
2.actully i`m a fan of making paper planes
3.it was a tie Cameron and it was at home so it not really true but i made it up
4.ok? but l`ll try to but i don`t really know how