I am a student at St Bernadette’s School.. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, August 8, 2019
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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Grant you will need to work on giving more examples instead of just saying you want a skate park cause it's so fun so instead you could say why it's fun and say how you could make it very safe for everyone.
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ReplyDeleteyou already said that 2 times
DeleteHi Grant I like your blog post I like the reasons they were very clear and easy to read maybe next time you could work on your "I" like I like this blog post, it is very good great job
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