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Wednesday, November 27, 2019

My Awesome story web (that i didn't finish)

During reading we read a story called take me to your leader. The story was about this purple alien named Gweep who was hiding in Tim closet and  who is talking to this boy named Tim he Gweep saying take me to your weader Tim did not know what he was talking about. We had to write out the the setting,solution,problem,actions and outcome.

I found the activity very hard.

What would you do if a alien went in your closet?
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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousDecember 2, 2019 at 10:32 AM

    hi grant
    I like that you were adding detail but not enough
    I also had an a Idea of adding heaps and more detail in it.
    can you add more detail for the characters.

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  2. AnonymousDecember 3, 2019 at 10:38 AM

    Hi grant
    I like how you were describing the characters
    it reminds me of my story web but more detail
    can you add detail about everything

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