during reading i was designing my own double waka we did this cause we read the book
what do you like about it?
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Hi Grant
ReplyDeleteGreat desgin of your hyper waka, I would like to know more. You could add some labels and why did you use a roblox character? I would like to see more of your blogs.
From Miss Rader
HI Grant,
ReplyDeleteWow, your double waka design reminds me of a rocket! I bet it goes fast. Next time challenge yourself to add some more information about your waka and how it moves.
Keep working hard.
Miss Satherley
Hi Grant.
ReplyDeleteDoes your waka have paddles/oars? I like the shape of your waka.
A little more detail would be helpful.
Keep up the good work.
Mrs Bowman
Hi Grant,
ReplyDeleteYou have designed a neat hyper waka.Maybe you could add some facts and label.Is it only for fun or to compete in races?Keep up the blogging.
Trish Wakefield
hi Grant
ReplyDeleteyou designed a cool hyper waka i like your all about me and maybe next time you could maybe add some writing to the hyper waka like some facts anyway love it keep going
from daniel